Minor Characters

Finch's Mom was a very intriguing minor character to me. She was dead through most of the book but all of the times her name was brought up or talked about it was very interesting to me. It was sad to picture a mother be as upset as she was and to care and be as helpless as she was. She loved Finch more than anything in the whole world but there was just nothing she could do to change things for her. So she treated her with her undying love and affection when she was alive and dead.

Taking Stock of My Work

I feel like I told my story very well. I liked the details that expalined my story and its topics. My paper could definatly be improved in many of ways. My main problem is that I have trouble adding length to my papers; and the length of my paper might have been a little short. The ideas from my paper came to me through a web. When drafting my paper with a web I feel I can think of several more ideas. I did not use any photographs or any other graphics in my paper. Others responses really helped me finish my paper by correcting most of my missed punctuacton and spelling errors. Next time I am going to take more time writing out my paper and have the length of my paper meet or exceed requirements.

My Dash

My dash of life is very fun and entertaining. I love my friends and family and love to laugh and have a good time. I appreciate how lucky I am to have the friends and family that I do. I have three brothers and two happy parents, they are all very different and thats what I love the most about them. I have been through alot with them and I know that they would do anything for me. My dash is filled with sports, the beach, and school. I have been playing sports my whole life, going to the beach every summer and going to school. In between my life has been great and I am very happy with the way things have worked out for me. I have great friends and a great family, and wouldn't trade them for the world. I hope the rest of my dash plays out as well as it has so far.

Glory Road

The book had a good start. The details of Finches burns and her terrible loner stories have kept me interested. Though there were times where I was not sure if Finch was talking to people that were dead or alive, and I still can not figure out who the mediator is. But for the most part it was an easy read and I read the material fairly quick.