Taking Stock of My Work

I feel like I told my story very well. I liked the details that expalined my story and its topics. My paper could definatly be improved in many of ways. My main problem is that I have trouble adding length to my papers; and the length of my paper might have been a little short. The ideas from my paper came to me through a web. When drafting my paper with a web I feel I can think of several more ideas. I did not use any photographs or any other graphics in my paper. Others responses really helped me finish my paper by correcting most of my missed punctuacton and spelling errors. Next time I am going to take more time writing out my paper and have the length of my paper meet or exceed requirements.